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		<title>“Why’s this so good?” No. 26: Moehringer KO&#8217;s a mystery</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 03 Jan 2012 14:38:31 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tommy Tomlinson</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[The hell with my lede. Let’s start with his:
I’m sitting in a hotel room in Columbus, Ohio, waiting for a call from a man who doesn’t trust me, hoping he’ll have answers about a man I don’t trust, which may clear the name of a man no one gives a damn about.
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The hell with my lede. Let’s start with his:</p>
<blockquote><p><em>I’m sitting in a hotel room in Columbus, Ohio, waiting for a call from a man who doesn’t trust me, hoping he’ll have answers about a man I don’t trust, which may clear the name of a man no one gives a damn about.</em></p></blockquote>
<p>That’s how J.R. Moehringer begins “<a href="http://articles.latimes.com/print/1997-05-04/magazine/tm-55180_1_bob-satterfield" target="_blank">Resurrecting the Champ</a>,” the greatest newspaper story ever written, and if you’re not hooked by the time the period slams that sentence shut, God knows why you’re here.</p>
<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-13431" title="tomlinson-t2" src="http://www.niemanstoryboard.org/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/tomlinson-t2.jpg" alt="" width="198" height="132" />I’ve read this story at least 100 times since it appeared in the L.A. Times Magazine* in 1997, and my bones still ache with envy. Moehringer has command of all the storyteller’s tools here – rhythm, pacing, metaphor – and I’ve spent many an hour taking the story apart like an old radio.</p>
<p>But what I love about this story the most is a simple thing that shows up in far too few nonfiction narratives:</p>
<p>Mystery.</p>
<p>That lede echoes Raymond Chandler and Dashiell Hammett and all those noir movies of the ’40s (Fred MacMurray in “Double Indemnity”: <em>I killed him for money. And for a woman. And I didn’t get the money. And I didn’t get the woman</em>.)</p>
<p>Moehringer gets a tip: A former heavyweight contender named Bob Satterfield – known for jackhammer punches and a tinfoil chin – is walking the streets of Santa Ana, homeless. Moehringer goes looking for him, almost gives up, then sees an old man, toothless and filthy – but with hands so big they hang from his sides like bowling balls. Moehringer approaches him.</p>
<blockquote><p><em>“You’re Bob Satterfield, aren’t you?” I said.</em></p>
<p><em> “Battlin’ Bob Satterfield!” he said, delighted at being recognized. </em></p></blockquote>
<p>And then what happens is…<span id="more-13410"></span></p>
<p>Well, here’s the problem. I can’t tell you.</p>
<p>Every great mystery has twists and turns. There are at least three places in this story where I still drop the printout (or now, the laptop) in disbelief. To paraphrase that great literary figure Rowdy Roddy Piper, just when you think you’ve got all the answers, the story changes the questions.</p>
<p>To explain the whole thing, I’d need spoiler alerts. When was the last time you read a story that required spoiler alerts?</p>
<p>I’ll tell you this much: To find out just who Bob Satterfield is, and to find out how that man ended up on the Santa Ana streets, Moehringer has to navigate false clues and blind alleys and several people who might or might not be lying to him. There’s a key conversation with Jake LaMotta (the boxer De Niro played in “<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YiVOwxsa4OM" target="_blank">Raging Bull</a>”). There’s a meeting in that hotel in Columbus. There are things Moehringer wants to see that he doesn’t. There are things he doesn’t want to see that he does.</p>
<p>Moehringer is a main character, right there in the first person, dealing with (among other things) major daddy issues. One thing I’ve wondered over the years is if the story would work without him in it. I’ve decided he has to be in there – above all, this is a detective story, and he’s the gumshoe who bumbles through the story, trying to solve the mystery.</p>
<p>By God, he solves it.</p>
<p>And then – as in the very best mysteries – there’s one more scene. We’re back on the California streets, our two main characters are talking…</p>
<p>And the very last line of the story hits you like a left hook to the gut.</p>
<p>It’s the best last line I know of. Every time I read the story, it stays with me for days.</p>
<p>Journalists often work on different kinds of mysteries. We’re great at doing the forensics on a failed campaign and pinpointing just where it went sour. We’re great at dissecting a game-winning TD and showing exactly how the receiver got open.</p>
<p>But those are mysteries where the reader already knows the ending – we’re just revealing the why and the how. The best mysteries start with a what – or, more to the point, a WHAT!?! – and take readers from there to places they’d never expect.</p>
<p>It’s easier when you can make stuff up – whoever created  “<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VH7VhP0Yr7c" target="_blank">Matlock</a>” owns half of Malibu by now. But to pull it off in nonfiction – to find the story, track it down and write it – that’s jumping off the high dive.</p>
<p>J.R. Moehringer has done all right for himself. He <a href="http://www.pulitzer.org/citation/2000-Feature-Writing">won a Pulitzer</a>. He wrote a <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Tender-Bar-J-R-Moehringer/dp/0786888768/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&amp;ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1325133320&amp;sr=1-1">well-loved memoir</a>. He collaborated on a best-seller<span style="color: #3366ff;"> </span>– <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Open-Autobiography-Andre-Agassi/dp/0307268195/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&amp;ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1325133368&amp;sr=1-1">Andre Agassi’s autobiography</a>.</p>
<p>But in my mind, he’s the guy who chased a tip, found a mystery, and ended up with the greatest newspaper story of all time.</p>
<p>They <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0416185/" target="_blank">made a movie</a> out of “Resurrecting the Champ,” starring Josh Hartnett and Samuel L. Jackson. I’ve never watched it. It’s not as good as the newspaper story. It can’t possibly be.</p>
<p>&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;</p>
<p>*<em>Yeah, maybe it’s technically a magazine story – it does run nearly 12,000 words. But to me, if it comes bundled with the comics and the coupons, it’s a newspaper story</em>.</p>
<p><em>Tommy Tomlinson (<a href="https://twitter.com/#!/tommytomlinson" target="_blank">@tommytomlinson</a>) is a storyteller for The Charlotte Observer, a Pulitzer Prize finalist, and a former Nieman Fellow.</em></p>
<p><em>For more from this collaboration with </em><a href="http://longreads.com/" target="_blank"><em>Longreads</em></a><em> </em><em>and </em><a href="http://twitter.com/#!/alexismadrigal/" target="_blank"><em>Alexis Madrigal</em></a><em>, see </em><a href="http://www.niemanstoryboard.org/category/whys-this-so-good/" target="_blank"><em>the previous posts in the series</em></a><em>. And stay tuned for a new shot of inspiration and insight every week.</em></p>
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		<title>Tommy Tomlinson: making words work for a living</title>
		<link>http://www.niemanstoryboard.org/2009/10/27/tommy-tomlinson-making-words-work-for-a-living/</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Oct 2009 15:17:07 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tommy Tomlinson</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A few years ago an intern did a study of the writing that showed up in our newspaper. He ran our stories through a computer program that measured the reading level you would need to understand each piece. It turned out that my stories were written at a fifth-grade level. If I remember right, I [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A few years ago an intern did a study of the writing that showed up in our newspaper. He ran our stories through a computer program that measured the reading level you would need to understand each piece. It turned out that my stories were written at a fifth-grade level. If I remember right, I was the simplest writer in the newsroom.</p>
<p><img class="alignleft size-thumbnail wp-image-735" title="tomlinson-t" src="http://niemanstoryboard.us/wp-content/uploads/2009/10/tomlinson-t-150x144.jpg" alt="tomlinson-t" width="150" height="144" />I caught some grief about that. But I was proud.</p>
<p>It can be harder to write a short story than a long one, and it can be much harder to write with simple words than with complicated ones. Most every good writer knows words that soar on silver wings. But sometimes those words fly off into the clouds and the reader loses track of the story. I like words that work for a living.</p>
<p>This goes straight back to my mom and dad. They grew up in sharecropping families a few miles apart in south Georgia. They picked cotton from the time they could walk. My dad had to quit school in the sixth grade, and my mom in the fourth, because they had to work. But by then they had learned to read and they never quit. My dad, when he was alive, read the Bible after supper. My mom, to this day, reads Harlequin romance novels. She buys them by the sackful at the used book store.<span id="more-734"></span></p>
<p>At our house the newspaper was a Christmas present six times a week. It was an afternoon paper, and it came about 4:30. We would listen for the thump in the front yard. I’d run out and get it, strip off the green rubber band – we saved them in a drawer – and we would split up the sections. <em>The Brunswick News</em> was as gray as fireplace ashes. It was all wire copy except for high-school sports, the police blotter, a piece or two on local politics, whose kids got married or made Eagle Scout, and the obits. We read every word.</p>
<p>What my mom and dad listened to was country music. Johnny Cash: <em>Love is a burnin’ thing, and it makes a fiery ring</em>. Hank Williams: <em>Hear that lonesome whippoorwill, he sounds too blue to fly</em>. The songs played with images in the same way a poet does. The words could tear you up, they were so powerful. But they were still simple and easy to understand.</p>
<p>When I started out writing for a living, I wanted to show off. I wrote stories that flashed back and flashed forward and might have flashed sideways. I wrote sentences that twirled like an Olympic figure skater. Sometimes I still do those things if I’m tired, or if I’m trying to write around a lack of reporting, or if I get the big head and start to believe that the world does not have the proper appreciation for my prose.</p>
<p>But one thing I learned from my mom and dad is that people can understand almost anything if you explain it in a simple and clear way. My mom doesn’t know a thing about nuclear physics. But if you sat down with her and explained in simple language what a supercollider does, and why, she would get it.</p>
<p>Our paper, like most, has a lot of readers who aren’t well-educated or well-read. That doesn’t mean they’re not smart. Writing in plain language is not dumbing down your story. It’s creating a map that all your readers can navigate. If your story is in plain language, feel free to let fly with complex ideas and literary devices. Your readers can handle it.</p>
<p>One of my favorite books is the 2001 novel <em>Jim the Boy</em> by Tony Earley. I don’t know to this day if Earley meant the book for kids or adults. It doesn’t matter. He tells the story of a boy growing up in 1930s North Carolina, and he writes it in language just about anybody could understand. It is full of images that work deep down inside you and stay. Here is Jim’s mother, a widow:</p>
<p><em>Although she was not yet thirty years old, she wore a long, black skirt that had belonged to her mother. The skirt did not make her seem older, but rather made the people in the room around her feel odd, as if they had wandered into an old photograph, and did not know how to behave. On the days Mama wore her mother’s long clothes, Jim didn’t let the screen door slam</em>.</p>
<p>The thing about writing a sentence a fifth-grader can read is that maybe a fifth-grader will read it. Or maybe somebody with a fifth-grade education will. And if that person understands what you’re saying – provided you have something to say – your sentence has made the world better. You have helped another human being make sense of things. That’s what a writer is supposed to do.</p>
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<p><em>Tommy Tomlinson has been a columnist with</em> The Charlotte Observer <em>for more than a decade. A finalist for the Pulitzer Prize in commentary in 2005, he </em><em>believes he is the only journalist in history to cover the Super Bowl, the Bassmaster Classic and the National Spelling Bee in the same year.</em></p>
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